P1 Animatic Review

My Animatic

P1 Shot Length 
Most of the shots in the sequence are around 2 to 3 seconds long with some of the other shots being a a bit too long than the should be, around 3 of the shots are over or around 10 seconds long these shots should probably be shortened or put more shots into the scene.

P2 Camera Movement 
The static shots in the sequence have dialogue to accompany the shot and I don't think that camera movement would help in the static shots unless it was a little zoom but I think that the dialogue it rests the audience in the shot with out having to add movement. The shots with movement really help flow the sequence together.

P3 Sound Levels 
Most of the dialogue in the sequence is clear and easy to understand but its quite easy to tell that we are reading the lines off a piece of paper, and most of Alex's dialogue was quite quiet but still easy to understand. The different volume of the dialogue going from low to high does affect the flow. There's a few background sounds in some of the dialogue but there not very loud and doesn't effect the dialogue that much.

P4 Voice Acting
I think the dialogue is quite easy to understand whats going on, but listening to the dialogue out loud some of the lines don't make sense together with the rest of the entire film. The voice acting isn't the best I've ever hear and its at all that convincing and you can really tell that we are reading them off paper. To make the dialogue more convincing we could put more emotion into the voice.

P5 VFX
I think its quite clear in the animatic where the special effects are suppose to be especially the lightning handshake at the end and the flame finger but we haven't made it very clear where the teleporting should take place in the animatic.

P6 Peer Feedback
The feedback I got was to add sound effects to the animatic this could help make it more clear where the special effects. That was the only bad feedback that I got